What a type 2 is
By Caleb Burnett Peterson
There are four types I am going to talk about a type two.
Types twos are very shy. They have a hard time keeping their room clean. They
tend to make piles in their room. Types
twos are fair. They are often quiet and they sit still well. My sister is a
type two. Sometimes she gets mad at me. Bu I still like her.
Another type is a type three and now I will
talk about the type three. Types threes like to be efficient. Type Threes hate to be Late. Types threes are
like fire. My Mom is a type three and some times she can be mean bu I love her.
Good job. The second paragraph needs 1 more detail. It also needs a more concluding ending.
ReplyDeleteGood report. You only have 2 words misspelled, "but" and "sometimes" The ending is a good conclusion. I hope in the future that I am not mean, but just strict, nicely.
ReplyDeleteOh, also the work three doesn't need capitalized unless it is the beginning of a sentence and you did a good job adding more detail.
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