All about Tommy Sheeran
By Caleb Peterson
I am
going to talk about Tommy Sheeran. Tommy is my best friend. We both like
Minecraft. We both go to the same school Mission Discovery School. I am talking
about Tommy because he is cool. He is nine years old. He is good at gymnastics.
His mom is Gabby. I am his best friend. I knew him when I was four. We both do VEX robots. He has one sister her name is Makayla. He is awesome.
You have a good report here. It has in introduction sentence. I has many details. It has a conclusion sentence. All the sentences are complete and have periods and capital letters. There are no mis-spelled words. Mission Discovery School is a name so it need capitalized, also VEX is written will all capital letters.
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